[Report This]Date: March 12 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 9: Armageddon
Very great. Not a fan of this genre but I love this story. Love how you seem to make it real with all the aspects of the tinies you wrote them in beautifully an it was cool how she would just walk an cause unprecedented amounts of damage just with her foot steps. But my favorite part was with Clair an Melvin with her trying to save him an him getting sucked up by her. Was very sad but also a cool scene. An the part where she was being held onto two people while trying to get in the ditch reminded me of the movie 'twister' an then Matt refuses to let go of her a manages to pull her in. Only wish that they could leave threw this horrible ordeal. So inspiring how they found love amiss all this chaos.
Octant wait to see what becomes of her sister on the dresser and of her when the police arrive.
Ps was Melvin a bum? Is that why he was so worried about his cart?
Well great read an glad to see this story back.
Can't wait to see when well see more of 'wedding story'.
Author's Response:
Glad you like this story. Melvin was a street vendor. The cart and the merchandise were how he made his living. Thanks for commenting,
minuss