[Report This]Date: January 24 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
Is there no 10 chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest. The remaining chapters are still in progress. When they are completed and proofed I will post them here and at GC. I had hoped to have an update to this one by now, but I have been working on one of my other stories The Wedding Story lately. I have been switching between the two.
minuss
[Report This]Date: December 21 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
Once again you've delivered yet another awesome couple of chapters. Eventhough this isn't my favorite type of story with it just being the mega an micro, but I find myself really enjoying this tale an waiting more. The only thing that I didn't like was the fact the the one guy warned her of her impending doom(not that I blame him she seems hot an sexy as hell) I just wanted her to finally get what's coming to her.
Aside from that eventhough it was too easy for him to be the DA assistant it fit well with bringing the story along. Well done
Aaron
Can I expect another addition to wedding story before the new year?
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it. I have nothing in progress yet for Wedding Story other than a few unwritten ideas. It doesn't mean that there won't be an update before the new year, but the chances are probably low: maybe 15-20%. Inspiration would have to strike fast and furiously for it to occur before Jan 1st.
minuss
Date: December 20 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
First thing, I found the destruction of the cities utterly boring but that's not really your fault minuss, I've just read too many mega stories with the same thing. With most mega giantess rampages there is really no tension in what's going on because it's usually a pointless slaughter. There is nothing really to keep me engaged besides the sexual aspect which nowadays is starting to fade. So while there is obviously a large audience for that sort of thing, it's just not for me anymore I suppose. In the end I pretty much skimmed through what Rachel was doing to the cities and concentrated on the few story bits. While Jared may have screwed the basement civilzation, it didn't matter, since Rachel was going to wipe them all out anyway. I like how despite Rachel wiping out like three cities, it took all of Eugene's men getting killed to realize that Rachel is a psycho bitch and really doesn't care about any of them. I have a feeling the ending is going to leave me depressed/pissed like In over your head. Normally I would have stopped reading this story due to mindless mega giantess violence, but typically when I start reading a story I always try to read all the way to the ending. Next time I'll definitely going to focus on the more gentler giantess stories.
No rating since it's not really fair to rate something I'm not feeling anymore.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your candor and I can understand your objections. However, it's been a while since I have written a story with wanton destruction and it was planned that this story would contain a lot of that from the get go. The story would've been much better, imo, if I had the time to fill in the eight years from the prologue through to chapter one. I could've illustrated the goddess's slow corruption from innocent do gooder to the power addicted person she has become, but it would've never been finished. As it is it will approach 60,000 words maybe more. Maybe I'll get to it later, piecemeal, like with the Wedding Story epilogues. Not sure if that would help it in your opinion or if you dislike all evil giantess scenarios.
minuss