Date: November 06 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, awesome start so far! Great detail, and who doesn't love a bad girl getting godlike power? :)
Really hope you'll add more soon!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue !!!
Your discriptions are spot on.
This has the makings of a classic.
Love thei idea of a God with absolute power.
I hope you follow your soryline to it's logical conclusin. No mercy, no remourse, just power.
While your setting might not be known to most viewers, who cares.
You have obviorsly chossen one that resonaces with you
Again excellent !!!
Keep up your excellent work.
Author's Response:
Don't worry! I will finish and stay on the course I've started...no suprise happy ending. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 28 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue !!!
Your discriptions are spot on.
This has the makings of a classic.
Love thei idea of a God with absolute power.
I hope you follow your soryline to it's logical conclusin. No mercy, no remourse, just power.
While your setting might not be known to most viewers, who cares.
You have obviorsly chossen one that resonaces with you
Again excellent !!!
Keep up your excellent work.
[Report This]Date: September 28 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
i love the direction, an the detailed descriptions about pizzazz's superb feet an toes.
aaron
ps love the size that she shrunk jem down to.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
kinda like 'bruce almighty' with a sinister twist..
loved the detailed descriptions involving her feet/toes.
the idea sounds really cool, just hope that it doesnt get too weird when she attains all the powers..
aaron