Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2019 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 79: Brave One

I'm so glad to see this story updated. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I will try

Reviewer: Aliakbar2 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2019 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Thanks jacksmith for contuconti this great story I thought all hope is lost but no there still is hope for this beautiful story .it's been so long since an update

Author's Response: Never say never

Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2019 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 78: Hard Lullaby

Such a great story... please don't let it die like this.
We want to see more!

Author's Response:

I don't want to make any promises about timelines and then break my promise, but I will say of my currently uncompleted stories, this one would be the first to receive an update when I have the chance.

Reviewer: Aliakbar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Peer Pressure

NEW CHAPTER

 

Reviewer: Aliakbar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding

NEW CHAPTER

 

Reviewer: Aliakbar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2018 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Sir u u ha written such a great story sooo far why don't you end it like a good story .U r a very famous and respected writer in this website we fans would like u to end this piece of art with a beautiful stroke .

 

Also a request

Why don't u introduce real fairies in the series.peter meets the fairies and gets to know that he is actually a fairy who by mistake got into the wrong place at the wrong time.Also he had not been given wings by the fairy queen Queen and hence he never had  wings .U know add some spice like this.He then meets his true family but never forgets his foster one and lives happily living between both the worlds

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. There actually is a healthy amount of story left to go before it reaches its conclusion, though I can't say when it will be continued currently.

I don't anticipate a full-on fantasy element coming into the story, since the tone of this is largely supposed to feel just slightly apart from reality, but I say readers are free to interpret where they may.

Reviewer: Bletch Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2018 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 78: Hard Lullaby

Hello! I hungrily read Blackmail, Julia, Family Reunion 1 and this one. I also appreciated "Her Sick Games" though it was a short one.

I love how you describe situations, your very realistic dialogues rich of mind games, and detailed characters psychology (little example: Erica feeling ashamed for his brother during his first school day on the bus).

I also noticed how sometimes in your stories you write about a main character dream in order to keep the narration not boring at all. You use dreams as an expedient to try everything, beside the story (not that much this time why?)...

 

And...Grrrrr, this story was all shiny, happy and colourful for like 75 chapters then it all turned dark by the mean psycho hands of Mandy xD That part is so engaging! I really feel bad for some characters and I really can't help but despise Mandy.

Peter was about to have a very good time making out with Lisa and what does he get?! Spending the night in full horror becoming some mad 15 yo new fairy-hamster XD

 

That story is so exciting and engaging so far! I love how creepy Mandy can be and I was shocked at her story about her hamster roasting alive in a microwave. Though I'm sure Peter will get out from this situation soonish. I sense Jessie and Suzanne will react very very badly and I don't know how Peter will convince them to let him stay in school.

I also feel bad for Lisa. She may be accused for lack of attention. I can't say if Sharon is involved or not in Peter's capture, but I hope she isn't.

Actually I'd prefer Peter to fall in Sharon's hand rather than Mandy's xD, if she hides a domineering side. I sense Sharon would be gentle and domineering at the same time, a bit like Carly but definitely not mad or overprotective. Mhh, maybe she'd be a strange mixture between Carly and Alison.

 

It was so exciting, breathtaking and angering at the same time...a big darkish cliffhanger. I really can't wait to read the next part. May I know when will you continue this story?

Sorry for my english.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the review. I like to use dream sequences to help color in the character's psychology and keep the action going when the story's in a gentler section.

This current section of the story with Mandy is definitely meant to feel like a sharp left turn into darkness, though things will be significantly lightened again, even if not everybody believes me until it's actually posted.

Sharon still has an important part to play in the story, so she'll indeed be back in a more prominent role eventually.

It's hard to say when I'll be able to continue this story since a lot of my focus has shifted to custom stories, but I do intend to return to this one sometime.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 78: Hard Lullaby

Sorry but I can't be sorry (about Mandy's past)

Author's Response:

Peter probably can't, either

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 78: Hard Lullaby

Mandy frowned, processing the sudden re-emergence of Peter’s hardiness.  Had to read that one twice.

Excellent rising tension.  Peter's been through so many perils and survived, it's difficult to keep the menace immediate, but Mandy's "nobody's little bitch" zeal is genuinely terrifying.  Stabbing the airholes with Peter in the jar is an image that will stay with me for a long time.  It's gonna be fun in the morning when Mandy discovers she forgot to let him use the outhouse before bed.

Author's Response:

I can see there being a double misreading on that one.

This is definitely meant to be a high point for the stakes in Peter's life. And he's definitely going to need to use the bathroom.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2018 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Glad to see this one back on the Most Recent page. Eager to read next chapter in this story, as always

Author's Response:

Thanks; the next one will be up soon.