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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Finally you're back ! Good Chap! I guess Jessica is still a bit traumazied due Stella part. I hope I gonna see Scott meeting his dad in timeout 7.



Author's Response:

Yeah Jessica hasn't forgotten easily. Scott will indeed meet his dad in TO7.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

54 chapters binge-read. 3 hours spent on it. 0 regrets.

I could give quite a few compliments, but I'll just stick to my biggest love: Sharon. I'm not sure whether or not I should hate her or offer her virgin sacrifices, and I feel like that's a good thing :) All that without her getting much actual "action" too.....it's impressive, the way you flesh out characters. Excellent work here, this is one I'll be following until the end.

Author's Response:

I hope they were hours well spent. I appreciate you taking the time to read through. Glad you like Sharon. She'll play a more direct part in the story later on.

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Have you ever considered to bring Family Reunion back to life? I know it's kinda open-finished, however I'd really love to see any spin-off depicting Tony's and Ashley's everyday life in it's desparate picture, I suposse. I really enjoyed a level of details you actually presented in this story and it would be a pity to leave it covered in dust.

Nevertheless, you've done a great job so far and I look foward to see your next chapters and stories.



Author's Response:

I have considered and even put a little bit of work into a Family Reunion sequel in the past. Someday it may happen, though I can't promise.

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Back at it; Awesome!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Ah, yes! The buzz-kill of younger siblings.

Author's Response:

Eternally may it buzz.

Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Good chapter! Im glad to see that this story is still being worked on. 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I'm hoping to add a bit more to this one in the nearish future.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Apology (grudgingly) accepted.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

It's just like Jessica to be jealous of the attention Peter gives to Lisa. Good thing Lisa recognizes it for what it is and knows how to handle it. At some point, Peter's going to have to stop trying to please everyone. He'll have to disappoint Jessica, or at least explain how her overprotectiveness intrudes on his relationship with his girlfriend. Maybe next time they can convene at Lisa's house. I would be interesting to meet her family and they wouldn't have to deal with Jessica's over attentiveness. Great chapter, sir! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. You're right about the crossroads Peter's in; someone's going to be disappointed at some point. And we will definitively be meeting Lisa's family in a future chapter.

Reviewer: JIM58 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

This is one of your best stories yet, keep up the great work

Author's Response:

Thanks. I intend to someday

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Great new chapter. I'd love to see more trio stuff with Peter, Blue and Cal. Who knows, maybe a showdown between Cal, Blue, Erica and Lisa VS Mandy, Shannon, Amy and Other One to capture Peter. It would be kinda cool. It probably won't reach such heights, but just throwing it out there.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I can't quite confirm or deny a massive showdown like that but we may well see several of Peter's allies coming to his aid in the near-ish future.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Nice interlude. Allows for a lot of further development of some of the long-neglected minor characters. :-)

Author's Response:

I'm doing my best to make sure some of these smaller side characters have a little personality to them.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Not too much happening this chapter but it's a nice calm after the storm of those feet! As for Blue, I wonder if she's going to be Lisa's rival for Peter's affection. It would be interesting to see them meet and guage Peter's reaction. Neither seem like the envious type, but they're only human, so they couldn't avoid the emotion entirely.



Author's Response:

Thanks! And that's an interesting thought about Blue. I guess we'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: plzBgentle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

im glad to see you continue this story, I really do like the characters. 

it is so close to my taste in this fetish, this latest chapter was starting to turn me on before the focus went back to feet. hoping Peter is pampered soon by one of these girls, lord knows he deserves it.



Author's Response:

Sorry you didn't like the feet stuff; this story's not very feet-heavy, though, so hopefully later stuff floats your boat more.

Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

Im not really into feet, but still really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

You know, if he were normal-sized, this would get her arrested by the cops of LAW & ORDER: SVU faster than you can "statutory rape!"

Author's Response:

There would indeed be consequences. And there may still be, though for who, I can't say.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

Not a fan of this gym 'teacher'. But, surprisingly, I'm starting to like Sharon more. Never thought I'd say that. In spite of her cold attitude, she *does* manage to save Peter from falling a lot. I think there's another side to her. It would be interesting to see more of it.



Author's Response:

Sharon's definitely a much different kind of threat to Peter than any of the other people who want to take advantage of him.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

Best teacher ever!



Author's Response:

Somehow I expected you to side with Ms. Watson.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

Liking this new blackmail subplot.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 52: Rub Down

I was starting to wonder if we'd ever get a teacher that would take advantage of him. Considering his vulnerability and the fact that this kind of thing happens with students/teachers of the same size, I think it's realistic to assume it would happen here eventually.



Author's Response:

Yes, it's an unfortunate reality that this particular scenario isn't that much of a huge stretch.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 51: Make Do

Great character development; bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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