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Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Great new chapter. I'd love to see more trio stuff with Peter, Blue and Cal. Who knows, maybe a showdown between Cal, Blue, Erica and Lisa VS Mandy, Shannon, Amy and Other One to capture Peter. It would be kinda cool. It probably won't reach such heights, but just throwing it out there.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I can't quite confirm or deny a massive showdown like that but we may well see several of Peter's allies coming to his aid in the near-ish future.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Nice interlude. Allows for a lot of further development of some of the long-neglected minor characters. :-)

Author's Response:

I'm doing my best to make sure some of these smaller side characters have a little personality to them.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 53: Fourth Wall

Not too much happening this chapter but it's a nice calm after the storm of those feet! As for Blue, I wonder if she's going to be Lisa's rival for Peter's affection. It would be interesting to see them meet and guage Peter's reaction. Neither seem like the envious type, but they're only human, so they couldn't avoid the emotion entirely.



Author's Response:

Thanks! And that's an interesting thought about Blue. I guess we'll just have to wait and see.

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