[Report This]Date: February 18 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I love how you used this chapter to subtly expose Carly's dependency on Jack and further define their complex relationship. It's as nuanced as it is fucked up. Well done.
Date: February 18 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 25: Jenny
I was almost sure that she was inviting Jenny to a very long day of heavy painful torture until he couldn't take anymore and give her the password. But Carly is so smart, she really want to break his mind and make him love this shrunken life as a pet baby brother. I think she is already pretty familiar with his weak points by now and is using against him, like she always say 'he is so easy'.
Don't know it's only me, but from the way she talks about him she kinda look like a mix of evil with gentle, more towards evil perhaps. The way she talked about him, it seemed as if he was the most precious thing of her life now, she doesn't even want another man in her life as he can fulfil so many things for her. Which answered one doubt I had, "Why she didn't had a boyfriend? I mean, she is really hot and popular." Maybe truly see him like a pet, as we sometimes love and take care of them but also we punish and treat them roughly when necessary. :P In my eyes, they make a good masochist couple. haha I'm still unsure if I cheer for his freedom or for Carly to break his mind before is too late.
[Report This]Date: February 18 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I hopping on the bandwagon and created a penname just to shoot you a review. I've been following this series since you first posted it and I personally think you've set the bar for new writers on this site. I was actually expecting Jenny to come in much earlier in the story, but I'm glad I was wrong. I'm really looking forward to what happens next and if her mindset has changed from the last story.
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to do that, i appreciate it. i hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters
Date: February 17 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly
Finally Jack make a play..and it works. Well done Jack :) Only thing is you gave her two days.
Date: February 17 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly
You sir bait and switch more than Vince Russo...it doesn't mean I don't love reading the hell out of this for as long as it goes.
Date: February 16 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Who is this Jenny I wonder? His ex-girlfriend? I haven't read alot but retained an interest since this story is where Carly may get her comeuppance but we'll see, we'll see. Hope Jack survives though. I wonder how Sophie will help Jack, time to shrink Carly down I suppose.
Date: February 16 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I admit it, I have no idea how this is going to turn out, this is one heck of a story!
Date: February 16 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
You know, I have to say, I'm not normally into the whole foot genre, but you've made me give it second thoughts. You're one hell of a writer.
Date: February 16 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
This story is entirely unbelievable. Your reference to Megavideo is implausible since it has been taken down by the US government. omgomgomgomgomg
:D
Author's Response:
I totally just was scrolling through some old reviews, saw this, remembered I never changed it, and CHANGED it! Past blast. Sort of.
Date: February 16 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Come on... lets see that bitch Carly burn!!
She either has to die, or enter into servitude under (and I do mean under) Princess Chloe. Either way would be deeply satisfying.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly
well now, i wonder what Jenny has in store, perhaps unknowingly?, for little Jack. this might be a long two days for him.
Date: February 16 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly
Oh man. After reading this chapter and seeing Jenny in the mix, i have a feeling i know whats gonna happen and Jack is gonna be in for a big surprise. :O
Date: February 16 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly
Keep up Jack!! You can do it, just two days! :D Can't be worse than five years, isn't? Or could it be...? oh boy... :(
[Report This]Date: February 16 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
Wow that was one of the best chapters. But did he send the video to anyone? Because if he hasn't all Carly has to do is kill him and destroy the video. I hope Jack gets help. But not before Carly tortures and humiliates him in one long session.
Dave
Date: February 15 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Even if he manage to gain freedom... I can not help but to keep wishing a happy ending for Carly. :( I like her.
Date: February 14 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
I'm getting real excited to see how this ends! :) That's definitely an effective cliffhanger you used at the end.
Another good, inventive chapter overall. Looking forward to what comes next.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
Wow. Its amazing that after 5 years of torture, he's kept his sanity almost entirely. Cant wait to read what happens next.
Date: February 14 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Ugh, while magnificently written, I m so disappointed Jack has gotten the upper hand. I do so love when the Giantess wins. Here's hoping she puts Jack back in his place.
Date: February 14 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
At first I was thinking Stockholm Syndrome then completely suicidal then I snapped back to how well this worked for the gang Julia was keeping...but bravo good sir you have hit the proverbial home run here.
I am hooked now reel me into the boat with the next chapter.
Date: February 14 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Jack, I've got to say - your stories are by far some of the best I have ever read. I'm looking forward to seeing Carly pay for all those years of torturing Jack, but I also don't wanna see the series end just yet...
Great work!