Date: February 20 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
Worth. The. Wait. Thanks a zillion!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
For someone that doesn't like the butt genre you did pretty good. I would have made Jack lick her ass as well as kiss it. But that's because I love the ass worshiping genre. But for someone who doesn't like it you did an excellent job on the chapter. Thanks for thinking of us butt lovers.
David
Author's Response:
sure thing
Date: February 19 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
Not an into the "butt" genre huh? Could have fooled me. Great stuff! As much as I want to believe that Carly is on the road to victory, I haven't forgotten about Sophie, that worries me a little bit. Riveting story!
Author's Response:
don't worry, Sophie will be making another appearance before things draw to a close
[Report This]Date: February 19 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
i was hoping jenny would have been a little more sadistic but it was a great chapter nonetheless. Maybe she'll be a little more playful in the morning.
Date: February 19 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
I liked it.
I expected her to be rather evil/bratty with him going in and you nailed it nicely. Though I am begining to wonder if even getting back to his family will be enough to ever -truly- get back to normal.
Author's Response:
especially after the ordeal of this chapter, i think i'd have to agree with you
Date: February 19 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts
Wonderful new chapter, I'm not much a fan of butt play but you did really great! I truly liked it. :) You work in such an excellent manner with the psychological of the main character, this is why I love to keep reading this story and be anxious to see how it will end for him.
Wow, Jenny was even thinking about stealing Jack from Carly? Hope Jenny doesn't get too addicted on Jack and decide to not return him or else Carly will be in serious trouble. Not to mention Jack, Jenny sounds more dangerous than her. Or maybe this is her real plot, make him see the hell and then realizes how it was the heaven with her. :D
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. and you are indeed correct with carly's line of thinking to win back her brother's "affections"