[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 22: Return to the White Room
One of the best chapters yet, man. GJ My only wish was that there were more of these "flashbacks" sprinkled thoughout part 3. How you continually come up with such awesome stuff makes you one of the best authors on here, dude.
As for the chapter, loved it.
Author's Response:
I hear ya on the flashback thing; you'll probably see a bit more of that in part 4, though, rather than this one at some point. glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: February 12 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 22: Return to the White Room
I literally just registered just to throw you a review. I've been following your writing since some of your earliest stories, and please know that I'm not exaggerating when I state that you have some serious writing talent. Never before have I seen an online author with the ability to give such dimension to his characters, to write such a compelling entertaining story, to give so generously his writings and ask for nothing in return.
There have been many days when I have come home feeling sad, and though you cannot expect a short story to lift your spirits to their peak, I would be lying if I said that viewing your name on "Most Recent" didn't put a smile on my face. I'd just like to say thanks, your stories really make my day a lot better and you're a fantastic author.
p.s.: I really like these types of chapters. It's a pretty awesome variation compared to the average size play.
Author's Response:
wow, i feel a little humbled. i'm glad you enjoy the stories so much. i get what you mean about these sorts of things being able to give a smile, sometimes all one really needs is a fun little fantasy (no pun intended) to make the gloom go away. i hope you continue to like what you read, and i hope you'll comment again sometime, i always appreciate reader thoughts