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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 18: When Giant Cousins Attack

Wow great chapter as usual. Jack seems to be in more trouble than ever. Chloe is nuts.

Dave

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18: When Giant Cousins Attack

I think the whole Chloe part is unnecessary. The guy has been through so much and I doubt that we need to compare Chloe to Carly. I hope that Sophie saves him soon, so she can help him get his revenge on Carly.

However, you always leave a great cliffhanger!! :)

 



Author's Response:

fair enough, you're entitled to your opinion. but really, this is a fetish story, the point in this case is to spread out the horribleness as much as possible, chloe is just meant to have a change of scenery

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