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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday

Great to see it back.

Reviewer: gerald Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

There are so many problems with the characters and their actions that I am unable to even count them all - their behaviour is completely ridiculous for the situation, she can easily overpower him in so many ways - and yet asks to "kiss her feet"? He is at least reasonable at the beginning and obeys while trying to convince her with reason - but call her names later? What the heck?

Their discussions then become just silly - I don't know how a teenager would behave with such power, but the world would look much differently now if it was like that.

Now, I can understand your apparent desire to make the story more cruel later, but she could have simply shown that from the start - but she seemed simply not to care about him at all (or am I wrong about it), but now just behaves unreliably.

I am finished with the story after this chapter, since I cannot find any hope for the next ones. Sorry...

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday

Great update. Love your writing style. An I can't wait till Amanda comes home on Wednesday.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday

As they used to say in those carnival bell-ringing attractions: "Close, but no cigar."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night

Whew! Talk about blowing hot and cold.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night

GREAT to see this updated.

 

Hope there is more.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night

This story is just fantastic an I'm so glad to see it again. But dang if Samantha is 5'10" how tall is Alexia 6'2", cause that's sexy as hell. Also love the pace of this story. Love all the dialog too, as well as the fact that the giant girls aren't mean or vicious. They just seem to treat him good if they are treated as such... That being said I kinda think that Alexia's reaction was right on the money at the end of ch. 7. an I can't wait to see where it goes from there.

aaron
ps I enjoyed the foot/toe scenes an hope that would be some kind of toenail painting. But I really hope that his boss finds him, but that is still a long way off.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Good story. But at the end of chapter 7 you went from I to you perspective.

 

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon

Great story. Can't wait to see what Amanda's reaction will be to the fact that Samantha's 'baby-sitter' is missing when she gets back. I would've loved to see how Amanda would react to him being tiny. Btw I really like the fact that the two girls are tall.

aaron
Ps is her name Alexis or Alexia? An what color are her toenails?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon

As usual, giantess cheaters _do_ prosper.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon

I remember this!

 

Welcome back.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunday Morning

Necro-bump.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunday Morning

Ha! The description of that eyeglass case reminded me of those old Popeye cartoons where he briefly gets trapped inside an exaggerated giant clam. But, somehow, I don't think any amount of spinach is to going break this particular spell.

Count me in for chapter six!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

Loving this story so far. I love how Samantha is treating the guy.

Dave

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

He's "shoe" in trouble, now. ;-)

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Pretty good. But I'm waiting to see some action before i give a rating.

Dave

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Saturday Shopping

I think he's right. Samantha is the type of spoiled brat who won't keep any promise she feels is personally inconvenient to her. I think she's going to show-off her new toy to Alexis (or is it "Alexia?") before they even leave that store!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Heh! I have a nephew who will be two years-old, next spring. And, I have a feeling he'll only be half the trouble for his parents that a 17 year-old daughter might be!

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha

If she talked to her own mother like that, Amanda would no doubt take the Bill Cosby approach and show her whose name is on the bills each month.

Whereupon, Samantha would then--equally doutlessly--shrink her!

Reviewer: ArtimusG Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha

Lots of potential here!  I enjoy the plot building, but I hope to see you incorporate some of the themes you added in the next chapter.  I'll give you a rating then. :)

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