[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 7:27 PM Title: Removed
Really glad you decided to pick this story back up! ENjoying it alot.! Can't wait for the Thornton character to get into the hands of Alisha!
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 5:22 PM Title: Removed
Just saw this story, an it's amazing. I love the detail an this spectacular plot. The idea was genius. I really hope to see more. Btw, how tall is the shrunken teacher, under 4" I gather?
aaron
PS will there be some foot/toe scenes to come?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for not responding to this review sooner.
3-4 inches, which I clarified in the recent chapter.
There will be foot/toe stuff down the line. I just wanted to have the right tiny and giantess for that scene. Alisha and Thornton aren't suited to it just yet.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2013 5:12 PM Title: Removed
Like where this is going. More substantial chapters would be nice.
Date: December 31 2012 7:31 PM Title: Removed
Really really, GOOD! I like the plot, and the slow build, it really has me hooked.
Im reading it slowly, and enjoying the devious giantess factor....
Keep going, and go crazy with (Attention to detail) from tinies perspective)
Author's Response:
Your review inspired the recent chapter. Yourself and Newschool both wanted focus on the tiny perspective, so the recent chapter is all about that.
I hope I did okay with it.
Thornton
Date: December 31 2012 6:05 PM Title: Removed
I'm glad to see the story has started back up, but I feel like it's lost some since you last left it. When I read this and the part where Alisha was imaging Thorton between her buttcheeks, I was so ready for some shrinking action, but now we've dived back into the plot. Plot is super important, don't get me wrong, but this far into the story you need to keep the shrunken play alive, even if it's only through imagination. I felt like you missed a good opportunity by not going into detail when Alisha thinks about keeping the teacher in her panties once she found her, or Alisha imagining what Eliza's reaction will be when Thornton's between her buttcheeks, or Eliza worrying what Alisha might do to Thornton if she does shrink him. Even just a paragraph about the shrinking I feel would have given the chapter more balance, or if you had made it even longer to where one of the girls finds the teacher. I wouldn't be saying this, but you had two chapters in a row missing that element, and in this point in the story, it always needs to be there, even if it's just a little bit.
I also am not a very big fan of the shrunken teacher. I'd much rather see Thornton, Ashley, or any of their friends shrunken. That could solely just be me though.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 5:23 PM Title: Removed
Wow. Just read this story an it's fantastic. Just that it ended right when it was getting good. Would have loved to see her rub an paint those giant toes. Oh well. Great story anyways.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 14 2012 2:23 PM Title: Removed
So glad you are back. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2012 9:09 AM Title: Removed
Love the story so far Thornton! Can't wait to see Thornton between her ass cheeks!
Date: June 09 2012 4:26 AM Title: Removed
This is my first time reading this, and I'm sad I never caught it when you first started adding chapters. I love how you didn't just immediately jump into the shrinking, but let the girls fantasize about what they want to do to the shrunken people. I wish it was a little more descriptive, but maybe you're just waiting for everyone to shrink before you do multiple paragraphs describing scenarios of something like a shrunken Ashley puckering up to Eliza's giant ass.
I also enjoy that there's a variety of characters and am curious as to what's going to happen to all of them. There's a various of combinations you could do, and you have me wondering what they'll be. Like, will the "Barbie Bunch" get shrunken, or did you bring up Sarah's ass being popular with the guys because you wanted Sarah to discover her ass is actually quite unpopular with shrunken guys? Will Alisha get to make her dream of having Thornton squirm between her ass cheeks become a reality, or will Eliza's feelings get in the way? So many questions! Can't wait to read the answers with each new chapter!
Date: June 08 2012 11:49 PM Title: Removed
Wow this is a great story, so much so that I felt compelled to create an account so I can write this review! Really glad you decided to keep working on this!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2012 10:41 AM Title: Removed
This was well worth the wait. Welcome back!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2012 7:40 AM Title: Removed
I dont know how I missed this story the first time around. Even your warnings are funny lol. You will be flattered until you hunt us down and kill us for stealing your story. I loved your chapter unwilling victim. The scene you presented was top notch. great work.
Author's Response:
I'm very flattered that you liked the story. I'm also quite happy to see that someone read the warnings.
I hope that my most recent chapter isn't a disappointment, it's been a while since I wrote anything like this.
Nice to know it's enjoyed, thank you again.
Thornton
[Report This]Date: August 24 2011 4:47 AM Title: Removed
Great story so far! Would love to see some feet/sock action. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Should be Chapter 9 or 10.
Glad that you're enjoying it. Thanks for the high rating!
Thornton
[Report This]Date: August 20 2011 5:41 PM Title: Removed
So, Ashley goes both ways? Didn't see that one "coming." ;-)
Author's Response:
Well, I'd like to think that none of the girls in the story are outright lesbians. I tend to avoid that subject as my last girlfriend turned out to be one. :D
Like, I wouldnt mind... but the girl she left me for probably had a bigger dick than me.
Sorry, what was I saying? Oh, yeah... Ashley's straight, she just likes to be dominant and in control. Humiliating another person to the point that she feels superior in all ways gives her a euphoric high. Which is why she enjoys tormenting Eliza.
And my favourite character, is Eliza. When she develops as a character, it's quite interesting...
Thanks for reading the story Carycomic, hoping you're still enjoying it. :)
[Report This]Date: August 20 2011 5:39 PM Title: Removed
Ooooh! A plethora of s******ds to root against. Nice touch!
Author's Response:
Just wait until Emmett's 'little' problem comes to Brittany's attention... I think her reaction will actually put Alisha's treatment of Miss Kelly to shame. ;)
[Report This]Date: August 20 2011 5:24 PM Title: Removed
Well, the bad penny is back. And, I loved the way you used the phrase, "It wasn't fair."
Congratulations, Alisha. You're the first person who didn't have to visit the Dalai Lama to learn the Meaning of Life! :-)
Author's Response:
I hadn't intended on mentioning this, but Alisha is infact a real person. And the personality that I've conveyed in this story, doesn't do her justice... in the sense that if she ever grows, we're all going to die.
So, be warned that patronising her will likely end in her registering and killing you.
As for the quote? Life isn't fair, someone ought to mention it every now and again. ;)
Date: August 19 2011 10:42 PM Title: Removed
This story is excellent! plenty of rivalry going around to ensure plenty gts scenarios later.
The unlikely victim chapter was amazing too....
You revealed that the chemical shrinks ojects as well would it be possible to have a vehicle with students in it get shrunk and chased by the girls?
This has always been a fascination for me to have a vehicle of shrunken ones give a girl wearing high heels a run for her money by driving under and around things to try to escape.
Also the dialouge is quite amusing by the way.
So do you think the vehicle idea is a good one?
Author's Response:
I'll be honest with you, I've thought about this... and I think it's a cheesy premise. Which is why I'm taking it as a challenge to incorporate something like that without it sounding terrible.
The entire vehicle would have to be covered by the formula, and it's only available as a spray or as a serum. I'd need to turn it into a giant gas cloud almost to get that sort of situation.
On the note of you wanting the gts' getting a 'Run for their money', that's definitely going to happen. Most stories revolve around characters that just try to defy their Giantess with words and they get punished. What happens when you have a genius that's determined to get back to normal size?
Glad you like the dialogue, I'm trying not to curse so much, but being Irish makes it like my second language.
Anyways, feel free to review another chapter to give me your thoughts. Who's your favourite character by the way? And is there any particular aspect of the fetish that you like the most?
Date: August 19 2011 5:36 PM Title: Removed
Not bad. This sort of thing is not really my speed, so I won't leave a rating, because it wouldn't be fair rating, but it has potential. :)
Author's Response:
I could link you to my old stuff on a different forum, it was high speed, revenge based stories that were quite graphic, but lacking in dialogue and storyline. I find that the most memorable stories for me are the types like, "A bad day for shopping".
I'm going to try and write a story that takes you in, gives you a favourite character and actually gives you entertainment thats memorable.
Thanks for reading, I appreciate it.
Date: August 19 2011 4:34 PM Title: Removed
I registered for the sole purpose of asking you to please keep writing. It is a great story and there hasn't even been any GTS content yet. Great work.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the lack of giantess content so far, when they get on the plane, all hell breaks loose etc. However, I did throw in some stuff in chapter 6, also, chapter 8 should be quite a bit of fun for Alisha.
And thank you, it means a lot to me that you liked my story so much to register. I'll try to keep updating as much as possible. However, if you do have any recommendations or things you'd like to see, feel free to throw them at me.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2011 1:31 PM Title: Removed
It's shaping out to be a very good story in progress. Can't wait to to see the gts content.
Author's Response:
I think the chapter you're thinking of would be Chapter 6, Unlikely Victim.
Although, Hidden Desires is quite nice as Eliza, the normally shy and insecure girl lets her imagination wander with what she'd do to a tiny Ashley.
Glad you're enjoying it so far, please feel free to review the other chapters and tell me what you'd like to see more of.
Thornton.