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Reviewer: Lester Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a nice little short story. I like the theme and hope the boy is gruesomely dealt with! I hope we don't have to wait for long to see what becomes of him!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review; the next/final chapter will show what will become of him

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response:

thanks, glad you like it

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story quite a bit. Great job as always.

Dave



Author's Response: thanks man

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it.  Simple, to the point, descriptive.  A good story all around!



Author's Response: thanks for reading!

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