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Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!

Thanks for pointing out the ratings mistake, I corrected it.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!

It looks like a good idea but chapter 1 seems to move a little fast and there are a lot of different scenes in just the one chapter.

How can a story contain inappropriate material for certain audiences but be appropriate for all audiences? That's how you've labeled your story by the way.

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