[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 7:47 PM Title: The Private tour
Brad Sherwood said it best, on WHOSE LINE...during a game called "Dr. Seuss Pick-up Lines."
"Are you my Mommy?"
X-D
Author's Response:
oh good lord X)
[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 1:46 PM Title: A new perspective
Glad to see this finally back! :-)
Sad to see Alaina reverting to type, just when I though she was reforming.
:-(
Author's Response:
I would have gone with the good alaina, except that I've literally spent all this time thinking about how to write the next chapter, but I michelle might be filling in the role of gentle caretaker.
-Jake
[Report This]Date: November 27 2011 7:58 PM Title: A new perspective
love the direction your headed in. an when will jake's caring/loving mother make an appearence..
aaron ps love all the foot play stuff an the fact that nique isnt enjoying it.
Author's Response:
I'm still trying to figure out how to re introduce Jake's mom, soon though If I had to guess, and there are worse things Nique'll have to deal with soon enough.
-Jake
Date: October 09 2011 2:51 PM Title: Relocation
Yrs I know, sorry, but I find it odd how someone would just strink out of the blue. Jake is small because of his genes if I'm not mistaken, but Nique is normal, if you will.
Author's Response:
you are mistaken, nique and jake were both shrunk by phalanx
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 9:53 AM Title: That Shrinking feeling
very cool. glad to see this story back.
but what about jake's mom? how long will she go without seeing her son..
aaron
ps i cannot wait to see what alaina does with jake an poor nique.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 8:34 AM Title: That Shrinking feeling
Let me upgrade my earlier evaluation: a possessive _psycho_ bee-yotch!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 8:32 AM Title: Intimate Relations
:-O
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 8:30 AM Title: revealations
I imagine that torturing a shrunken foot-fetishist with the sole of one's foot is like a masochist getting beaten up by a loan shark's leg-breaker. Relatively more enjoyable for the first than the second.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 8:27 AM Title: Mouthing off
Possessive bee-yotch. Isn't she?
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 8:24 AM Title: Sole mates
Now, this is one reason why I prefer feet to meters.
Date: October 07 2011 8:22 AM Title: No If's and's or Butt's!
And, now off to the the next (hopefully less gross) chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2011 2:31 PM Title: Intimate Relations
wonder how alaina(sorry if thats not her name) will act when she finds out about this... an what she said/did to michelle...
at any rate i love this story an cant wait for more.
aaron
ps the foot/toe scenes as well as the insertion were written beautifully. keep it coming
Author's Response:
I appreciate the support :)
Date: September 25 2011 9:27 AM Title: revealations
I hope Nique can save Jake form Alaina...
Author's Response:
well just have to wait and see
[Report This]Date: September 24 2011 4:56 PM Title: revealations
great chapter.. this story is awesome. keep it up!
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 22 2011 1:42 PM Title: Mouthing off
hope instead of be too hard on michelle, she'll try to gets some pointers on how to please jake...
anyways, great chapter an i hope to see more.
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 20 2011 1:49 PM Title: Sole mates
story is very believable. great job.
an i cant wait for more.
aaron
Date: September 20 2011 8:08 AM Title: Relocation
very good story and excellent chapter! give feet to your people!! :P
[Report This]Date: September 09 2011 9:51 PM Title: Girls Night in
not bad, this chapter is probably the best of the story, you seem to be putting some effort into including some good sensory details, so good work there. where i'd say put a little extra time is in your character development; given the speed with which your protagonist was thrust into his new life, it can in a few places be hard to believe the actions of these total strangers, although i realize some leniency is needed here since these are the more fetishistic episodes of the tale. additionally, it might not hurt to go through and fix up incorrect capitalizations, etc, as it can make reading smoother. keep it up!
Date: September 09 2011 2:57 PM Title: Bathtime
This is the best story I've read in months. Please keep this up, I'm sure many people like me are eagerly awaiting your next installment!
Date: September 08 2011 9:34 AM Title: Bathtime
Thanks for the warning. I don't go there, at all!