[Report This]Date: July 05 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7: Wine and Shoe Tasting
Now that's what I call a shoe shine!
Author's Response:
if shrinking were possible, i'm sure someone would be able to get very, very rich from a shoe shine business utilizing this method :)
[Report This]Date: July 04 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6: Belly-Up
im really enjoying your style of writing. well done an keep it up.
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks man
[Report This]Date: July 03 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: Belly-Up
Another fantastic chapter. I love the way Alison is treating Ashley.
Author's Response:
as does Alison ;)
Date: July 03 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 6: Belly-Up
I had no idea that she was wearing a white skirt... Oh well.
Author's Response:
eh it's all good, same basic thing, right?
[Report This]Date: July 03 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: Hanging Out with Alison
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: Girl Time
this story is very cool. love how it is progressing. an cant wait to see what the future chapters will bring.
aaron
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5: Girl Time
That was gross but fun and well done. I loved it.
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks. I was trying something a little different in this chapter, going more for a good-because-its-so-humiliating vibe
[Report This]Date: July 01 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4: Hanging Out with Alison
I love the way Alison is getting even with her cousin. Ashley is such a Bitch. Great Chapter.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 01 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Hanging Out with Alison
Ashley just couldn't keep her big mough closed!
I wonder if she really can't swim? We might have a fatality on our hands here.
Date: June 30 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3: Grown-Up Discussion
interesting start....look forward to read what happens next. should be good though, your stories always are.
Author's Response:
thanks man
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Grown-Up Discussion
This is a great story so far. I'm really liking it a lot.
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: A Nice Get-Together
Uh oh. I have a feeling the shits gonna hit the fan in the next chapter. Grest chapter.
Author's Response:
hey bud good to hear from you on my new story. And you are correct, there will indeed be shit-hitting on the fan. ;)
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
A very good start.
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 3: Grown-Up Discussion
Yes, I too am more than a little curious as to what Alison is up to with her charge over her new pets.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Great story.
I know you said that you like long buildups and I like them.
But they at the same time killing me.
Author's Response:
stay tuned, the "meat" of the story is starting up here
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I like what I'm seeing here and can see how the power structure in this family is shifting right before the victim's eyes (although it might not have dawned on some of them yet).
I hope you add frequently to this story as you definately have my attention.
Author's Response:
thanks; and i do update pretty frequently on stuff, so no prob there