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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 24 2011 7:03 PM Title: Anti-Aging; Made Easy

It's not "water".  It's "cum", "juice", or "discharge".

This story would read better if it was told in the past tense.

In any case, this is a good, imaginative story.

Please continue writing.

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