[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
This was the most unique and interesting vore story I've read in a long time! I loved the way you used it here! Good message! This was also very well-written in general; sharp in it's realism and very sensual in language and presentation. A very refreshing read!
Author's Response:
It's always a fun surprise getting reviews on old stories. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Very nice story and plot. An interesting story and quiet refreshing. You explained your ideas well and put them on paper perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. It's always fun to know people are still reading my older stories.
Date: July 26 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Quickie? I wonder what you consider a long story. I was drawn in from the beginning. The characters were convincing, and your sensory descriptions are very strong. This helps the reader "be there". If this is what you just "pop out" for fun i would love to read what you've actually put work into.
Author's Response: thanks for the comment. long, to me, is something like 100,000 words or so; this was the shortest thing I've written so far
Date: July 17 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Great story man. Very well written and descriptive. I was a little dissapointed in the end result as a melevolant but beautiful doctor who swallows men alive. I was dissapointed that he was allowed to live. It would be an excellent vore story but otherwise great job.
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you enjoyed it. i considered ending it with the 3rd chapter, but decided i liked her character too much to have her be evil