Date: June 12 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: CULTURE VS FUTURE
Forgot to say also that the puns you use are second to none its incredible how u keep coming up with more
From you friendly neighbourhood peeping tom......... I mean spider man
Author's Response:
Well I hoped (quite accurately) that the master punster and prolific reviewer Carycomic would read the story, and he did. I'm glad you liked it too.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: CULTURE VS FUTURE
Do u mind if I write a sequal where the simbiote comes back with its creator in tow /not the real one but that guy who can shrink to the size of an ant saves spidey but makes betty supersized in the process
Author's Response:
Do I mind? I'd love to read it. Just mention in the story notes that it's a sequel to Timescribe's story "Spectacular Spider-Man: 20 / 16 Hindsight" and go for your life.
When it's up, send me an email with a link to the post, and I'll put a promo for your story in the chapter end notes of mine.
If you want, I can create a Marvel series and pull both our stories into it.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 10: GRIP THERAPY
Okay. How about he gets saved by (drumroll, please)...THE GREEN LAXATIVE!
Author's Response:
Yes, please! Do it! Then he gets threatened again by Norman Osborn's sister, who becomes THE GREEN GOBBLER.
Seriously though, please do a parody sequel.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 9: PARKER COURSES
If he still had his artificial web-shooters, he could climb back up her throat real easily. Ah, well!
Author's Response:
But would they stick to a wet throat? The tongue actually starts part way down the throat.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: THE LONG CENTIMETRE PRINCIPLE
Absolutely right. :-)
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 7: BETTY TAKES THE LEEDS
Considering that the b/w costume is a sentient organism, one could describe this little bit of love-making as a "shrunken man-age a trois."
Author's Response:
Oh no, please, not that. As a christian, I'll have homo-costumic phobias just thinking about it.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 6: WORST STEPS
He kept faith with Betty...and himself. Excellent!
Author's Response:
He knew he could do much Betty than Felicia Hardy.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 5: TONGUELAND
Serious, now: this is getting good!
Author's Response:
That Cat! She'll do anything to get Spider-Man out of her hair.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 4: SHRINKING PAINS
Hmmmmm! How did the symbiote know about Spidey if it never bonded with him before? Did it separate from the Eddie Brock that traveled to Counter-Earth in the previous "Spider-man" cartoon series? Only to somehow be sent back to our Earth in an alternate past? Will these questions be answered, at the end of the next chapter, by the truest believer of all?
Author's Response:
Well in fact i just beefed up the symbiote's mental powers to tell my tale.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVIVAL OF THE SWEETEST
Ah-ha! This is the beginning of the full-sized end for Spidey.
Author's Response:
Black Spidey meets Black Cat too!
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: MAY DAY
Ah, yes! "Excelsior;" which I believe is Latin for "scraps of Styrofoam shaped like popcorn."
Author's Response:
Then whip out your excelsior and watch the show!
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: CULTURE VS FUTURE
I haven't seen this cartoon series since it was revealed that Peter Parker and Eddie Brock were co-workers at Curt Connors' lab! So, I won't have any preconceptions about your upcoming chapters.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. I won't Brock any interference from that character in my stories.