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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hey! Don't feel squeamish about adding one more chapter if the inspiration for it has hit you. I always pre-plan 30 chapters for my stories! Sometimes, I exceed that mark. More usually, I come in under it. Take the Adam West Bat-pastiche I just finished. It took me 21 chapters to break the 10,000 word-barrier. You did it in six! And, you've garnered almost the same number of readers. Not too shabby for a new member of the club! :-)

Author's Response:

Heh thanks for all the support Cary. It has definitely been fun fleshing out new ideas of where I want to go as I start each new chapter. I don't know yet, but this may end up being much longer than I'd originally imagined. And it's given me a few ideas for possible other stories as well, which is great.

Reviewer: Firewall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

This may not look good for Tom. He better get to Rosa before the "Intruder" spots him.

Don't feel discouraged about extending the story if you have to. There are alot of authors that feel that way about their stories. I would love to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

Uh-oh! Looks like Sarah was the only one who intended to benefit from Tom's loss of stature.

Great plot twist; cannot wait for the next chapter. :-)

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