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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well, as far as I'm concerned, this fourth chapter would make an even more suitable conclusion to the story. For example:

"And, he lived happily ever after in...

HER END"

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