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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, you definitely have a winner, here!
Because, I'm now conflicted between eagerness for chapter 4...and, with being so satisfied with chapter 3 that I wouldn't mind if it were the concluding chapter!

In short; good job, all around.

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