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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2022 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good erotic story; would have been better with 1 more chapter with Sarah and Tom and if Sarah had fought and squirmed a bit more at the end as she was vored, IMO. In other words, it felt as if there was a bit of a rush to end the story.

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really glad you finished up the story. Though, I do wish it went on longer. This is my absolute favorite story on the site. The way you describe Rosa is just perfect. Hope to see more stories from you.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is absolutely amazing!! I don't tend to give out 10s, but this one totally deserves it.
Beyond hitting most of my buttons (and you did the anal really well, despite my not being into that as much), I should also compliment you on your writing style. The sentences flow well and demonstrate a good mastery of the language.

Reviewer: NFalc Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this quite a lot!  Not a big fan of anal personally, but hey, if someone doesn't like a section they can always skip it, so keep on doing what makes you happy.

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

like this nice job

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it, nicely written and to the poiny, looking forward for number 3

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Nice opener. And, it's pleasantly refreshing to see a gts/sm story where the man doesn't shrink, or giantess appear, right in the very first chapter.
Something that a lot of other readers might object to by just lurking, instead of reviewing! But, I say: stick by your guns. And, upload the rest of your chapters as _you_ see fit!

With that, I'm now off to chapter 2.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, and I agree, often I'd prefer for a story to ease into things rather than jump right into the thick of it. I'm hoping to update frequently enough, especially since I'm finding it easier to come up with material than I imagined I would which makes me very happy!

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