Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

I enjoyed this story greatly when I first read it months ago, but I neglected to review it then.  I just re-read it, and it still hits the spot.  The action is wonderfully juicy, one of the better insertion scenes I've read.  I particularly enjoyed getting Rosa's side of the encounter. 

I also admire the way Tom makes the transition from Rosa's supervisor to her pet.  It's tough to find the balance between realistic character reactions and servicing a fantasy, but I was right with Tom every step of the way.

Thanks for writing!