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Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

are you not going to continue this stpry? :(

Reviewer: MayhemInsured Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow, this is truly a lovely story. The scenes with Jameson and Dorian are touching and 'aw'-worthy to say the least and I like the character of Fae too. Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very cool story, and very original as well, keeps the right pace to keep up the suspense.

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait to see more! i'd also like it if you checked out my new story too!

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

I cannot wait for the day when dorian pleasures jameson, I have indeed been inspired sir or ma'am, whichever you are :D



Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad I could inspire you! Don't worry that day is coming (no pun intended), and I can't wait for it either! And it's ma'am :)

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

definetly more dorian and jameson, this is the first story of its kind on here, and i'm excited to see where it leads! :D

Reviewer: kingsun Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I vote for more Fae, Sarah. Theo :P

Reviewer: Tai prime Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

A like the Dorian/jameson.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really like how you describe her feelings of impotence against the giantesses, your narrative makes me identify with tiny fae! Look forward to more

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the story, though like other reviewers I find the child abuse issue uncomfortalbe and unnesesary. I hope the story does not slip towards that direction or I will just quit reading it.

On the positive side I really like your narrative and character development!

Reviewer: Parrot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow  very creative start  nicely done

Reviewer: shrunken_luigi Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

good story. the only thing i dont like is the age of the characters too you :(
But really like your idea and writing style.

Reviewer: Candlelight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

A breath of fresh air! It feels good to read something besides the one page shrink-and-squishes. I like the multiple angles and great descriptions. Don't be afraid to push the envelope, keep it up! :)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hmm, if there's boys and girls too that would make him a pedofile. I not sure I want to want to read the next chapter now. Besides, I was hoping for some sort of backstory too. Sorry. :/

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Sarah,

Odd story you have here, but it looks like it could be a unquie.

Reviewer: Klyk Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh nice story this one has great potential.

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