Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hello Bob.  Yes, I'm still around and would like to thank you for many of your yarns...which are quite stimulating! 

  I don't supose you'll reply to this after so long, but, if you do, you'll be so welcomed.

 

BTW: MY EMAIL ADDRESS IS banfield18@blueyinder.co.uk

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

I say, Bob, it's good to see you are continuing submitting a yarn. However, this one "Dinner for two" seemed to lack any eroticism such as the more revealing description of the two diners. The story simply read like any other yarn - rather mundane and offering no form of excitement.   I rather feel that it was a rush job.

One thing I'd like to point out is that the act of swallowing can hardly give the girls the essence/flavour of taste.   Perhaps it's me, Bob, having read so many stories of this type.  So please forgive my criticisms.

Author's Response:

This was a bit of a rush. Not my best work but I wanted to submit something so I was left with this. Best wishes.