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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 22

holy shit... feels like jurassic park, running from the rex. lol.
but the chapter was amazing. great job.

loved the way jodi first was incredibly furious and then was very compassionate. she (imo) acted very realistically. also enjoyed how she wanted to make herself huge an then she kinda convinced him to agree with her.
remarkable job at story telling thus far. cant wait for the next installment.


aaron

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

A very good and very exciting chapter.I hope you don't kill off Jodi.

Dave

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

Next up: "Jodi Kong vs. Sharizilla!"

:-D

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