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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter. I hope he gets away or get help to stop Shari soon.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very nice, if i was him and being put throught what he had, i would take the rest of that for my self. I would like to see him take it, he deserve it for all that he gave.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow.   I didnt expect this.  Great cliffhanger at the end of this chapter.   Cant wait to read whats in store next.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ah-ha! So, that's the dirty secret.

I can't wait for the next chapter, to see how Our Hero exploits this opportunity. :-)

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