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Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

YES. Please keep it up. Brillaint writing.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

what an awesome chapter. this story is really great. cannot wait to see where it goes from here.


aaron
ps jodi has pretty feet

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

One of the best situational stories that I've read.

Well done - so realistically described.

I'm looking forward to each and every chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I was striving for a more "realisitic" feel, so its nice that it's being recognized and appreciated. Thank you for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

All I can say is: WOW!!!!!

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