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Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish I worked there too, haha.  Great start so far, really excited to see where it goes from here.

Reviewer: Gheed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

The setup of this story is just bursting with potential right now. Having read all of your work, I have the utmost confidence you'll make this a great piece of work.

I mean hell, I started salivating when I just saw the tags.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

great plot. this has the makings of being a great story. cant wait for more.


aaron

Author's Response:

Check back later tonight, I should have Ch. 2 by then.

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 24 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this looks very promising...I suppose my only criticism would be that I want to read more!

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