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Date: April 13 2018 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: AdoFD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks a gripping story. Very enjoyable read 

Reviewer: The GTS Reviewer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hello, littlemac.  I realize this isn’t your most recent work, but I began reading this a while back and only just recently finished viewing it in its entirety.  It’s an excellent piece of erotic fiction, but of course, with your caliber of writing, it’s elevated well beyond simple fetish literature.

 

THE COMPLIMENTS: What stands out the most in glowing, neon letters of quality is your handling of your characters, perhaps the most crucial part of any given giantess story.  Your protagonist is relatable and familiar feeling, yet simple and unbiased enough at the start that the reader can easily project themselves into his psyche and fill in his shoes along the way to more fully experience the joys and nightmares alike.  Of course, your handful of giantess characters is really the meat and potatoes of what makes the story breathe so well.  You manage to cover most of the bases in terms of subgenres, each woman representing a different facet of the fetish, meaning you certainly appeal to a variety of tastes in readers.  You have the gentle girlfriend character, the evil and domineering boss, the seductive yet friendly coworker… it’s a perfect blend that works superbly, as you give each one ample “page time,” shall we say, allowing them to be fully fleshed out and connect with the reader in some way, be it a mini-crush on the girlfriend, or legitimate loathing of your villainess (both of which were feelings I had while reading).

 

Your plot works wonders for drawing in the reader.  At the start, especially, it feels like anything but a standard fetish story, with a realistic setting and only the tiniest glimpses of sexuality that do just enough to invite the reader further into the fiction without alienating by sparseness of detail or, on the flip side, an over-aggressive assault of pornographic images.  So, what begins in realistic and familiar fashion seamlessly becomes a full-on giantess narrative without the slightest need of notice by the reader.  I was so pulled into the fiction and so enjoying the events, both narrative and fetishistic, that it wasn’t until your climactic giantess battle where it suddenly occurred to me the change that had taken place.  It’s a fantastic effect.

 

Your dialogue is among the best on the site.  I’m a real stickler for realism in the speech of these stories, because anything doesn’t sound even remotely realistic comes off like watching animatronics trying to perform awkward sexual advances on one another.  This is certainly the polar opposite of that, with continuous, flowing dialogue that not only effectively moves the plot along in the sections of lighter description, but often contributes significantly to the effectiveness of a fetish scene.  In fact, I often found myself preferring your chatting segments to the scenes of actual description because they were so strong.  You give each character a very unique voice, even keeping a consistent dialect of sorts by including pet names and similar sentence structures, which makes it easier to play out the words in one’s head while reading, imagining the points where punctuation and emphasis are placed.  To many, it’s a small detail, but you seem to have put some work into it, adding to that all-important extra dimension of the characters, elevating them above static cut-outs to real, lifelike entities.  Kudos.

 

THE CRITIQUES: Hopefully my suggestions don’t come off as petty; as you can probably guess already, I was definitely a big fan of this tale.  Probably my biggest gripe of sorts, however, has to do with your descriptions.  They are there, certainly, and function effectively, occasionally even providing enough juicy information to usurp the dialogue as the best part of your story.  Ultimately, I guess what I was hoping for was just a bit more in-depth exploration of the visuals, mostly because, given your skill at all other aspects of the story, I think heavier description wouldn’t have slowed down the story in the slightest and perhaps even added to the impact.  Regardless of whether this was your reasoning for going a little lighter on it, I’d love to see more tightly packed segments of descriptions, primarily in your fetish action scenes, in your future works.

 

This is just a nitpick, and was mostly only noticeable because of the caliber of the rest of your story, but I didn’t feel the elaborate plot involving your antagonist’s essential megalomania was necessary to the flow of the narrative.  It really only caught my attention since the rest of the tale has such seamless realism while integrating the giantess elements within the well-explained fictional parameters.  I recognize that it was nearing the end of the tale and perhaps was needed to amp up the stakes slightly, but I’m not certain it was necessary.  Again, but a minor blip for me on an otherwise exceptional plain.

 

OVERALL: There’s a very good reason why this story, and you as an author, get so many readers hastily clicking the link on your page.  This story, and your repertoire in general, is probably one of the best arguments a person could use for a case in favor of fetish literature as a higher form than pornos.  The written word gives so many more opportunities than videos or pictures to bring this fantasy to life, and you take full advantage of it with three-dimensional characters, addicting dialogue, and a perfectly formed narrative arc.  I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Author's Response:

I'm absolutely floored by your helpful and insightful review. Thank you profusely for providing your thoughts; I'll certainly take it to heart and hopefully I can implement your suggestions in future works. :D

Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this story! Awesome growth - loved it. After reading this I read your other two stories and I can't wait to read anything else you write!  Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I am working on another story at the moment, and I'll probably start it in a month or so. Keep an eye out, and thank you for reading my stuff.

Reviewer: dycemist Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is by far the best on the site. I can't wait for your next story. It would be great if you could continue with some details of the 'island life' with a little mini story! Perfect story in every way. Keep going.

Reviewer: MrNobody Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I actually created an account on here just to tell you what a brilliant story you have written here. This story is by far one of the best I've read on here. It's stories like this that make me wish this fetish was common and talked about in our society so that more people could enjoy it, hell maybe even make a movie out of it....if only.

Anyway thank you so much for taking what must have been an incredible amount of time to write this beautiful work of art.

Author's Response:

Wow, I'm impressed. Well thank you for speaking up and don't be afraid to let others know when they've done good work.

Reviewer: Mayo271 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

JODI VS. SHARI WOOT WOOT I THINK GONNA WIN JODI WIN!

Reviewer: chicletsized30 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

again...the best story i've ever read. I've checked every day for a new chapter...thank you for two!!!

Please let Shari find the powder, I want to see what a new world would look like with Shari as the all-powerful god!

 

Great Job!

Reviewer: havokap Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have looked at stories on this site for years. But I just registered to the site to comment on your story. I love it and the fact it reads more like some ones diary

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, it really means a lot to me!

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it , great job Littlemac! I really like the slow yet not-so-slow pace, its kept my attention going all the time. Eager to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you kindly for reviewing. I was initially concerned about the pacing, being that this is the slowest story I've written thus far. I'm happy that everyone seems to be enjoying it.