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Reviewer: IWTS Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

A really good story

Reviewer: Jester Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2008 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good.  A bit hard to understand sometimes, but overall not bad at all.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2006 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

i really enjoyed this story alot.. the slipper and the socks were the height of my own fetish fun and while the vore wasn't so much.. i did enjoy the whole of the story..

i think maybe my favorite part was when he was in the slipper and the girl was unaware that a tiny man was inside.. that was simply fun to read and there's something a little bit more exciting about the whole voyeur end of things for myself..

i should cut this short.. i loved the story and look forward to your next ones.. the paragraph spacing was a little rough for reading but that is rather trivial and just a matter of personal preference.. everything else was top knotch! well done!

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