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Date: March 13 2018 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 12 2018 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

You have a fascinating story here, reminiscent of Mercedes Lackey's writing style, and I hope that one day (soon) you will continue. It is seven years since you last added to it, and I look forward to the completion.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

Am happy to see you are back and still wrighting stories.

A very lovely new charpter, everything is starting to work out for all of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks Angel!!!  It's nice to hear from you again too!  I've been working on some of my fanfic.  I usually go back and forth between the two.  Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

Another great chapter you did, i hope that Marta can have her happy ending that she is hopping for.

Your stories are much fun to enjoy and read, you are a good wrighter and have been doing a great job on your stories.

Am liking all of them, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Angel!  I'm glad I can keep you entertained.  I try my best to make my stories interesting.  I have another chapter coming soon hopefully.  As always, I enjoy hearing from you!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

How tall is Ansel and Gerta now?



Author's Response:

This story I decided to let your imagination decide.  Take the scale of things and put a description in your mind.  They are taller than doorframes in this fairytale world and Gerta notices that the bigger men of the village barely come up to her shoulders.  So you can imagine someone who really stands out because they can see over the crowd.  Thank you for asking Angel.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

This is a change of pace fpr this site and I am really liking it quite a bit. You are a very talented writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  I like to think outside the box and write fantasy.  This story has been a lot of fun to write because it's so different.  Thank you again for the nice review and stars!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

The story has been very good and fun to read, i been enjoying it very much. You have a very fun way of telling your stories that you wright. I love that you have both male and female giants in your stories.

 

Keep up the great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you Angel!  I enjoy writing this twisted fairytale completely.  Now that the kids are back home we'll get to see how they adapt to the small world around them.  I didn't like to make my giants so big that they lose their humanity.  Jakob and Marta weren't even aware of what they were till they are found.  Hopefully I can get to a bit of a love story now.  Thanky you again Angel!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is avery enjoyble story, you are doing a great job on it.

Am happy to see so many people are enjoying it also and leaving you comments on it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Angel!!!  I'm glad you're enjoying this.  It is always nice hearing from you.  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: pabree Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is a wonderfull story. Im so glad it didnt end up an incest lover story, those literaly make me. i love a nice gentle G rated story from time to time, infact im trying to wane my self off of the explicit writing do to the fact that they draw unwanted reviewers.



Author's Response:

Thank you pabree!!!  I don't like the incest stories at all.  I think I've pretty much said that before so you won't see it here.  I'm not afraid of smut but I think you should only use it if the story allows.  I don't see it happening yet for our protangist in this one but there is an adventure presenting itself.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ah, this is a nice twist. I wonder where they will go. I don't mind giants so long as they no invovled in anything sexual, because I am in no way gay, but I have to say, when watching cartoons as a hild I always wondered why giant were always male. I personally would try to avoud using them if it were me though but it's not me, and I think you've done good so far.

In relation to my lat review, I don't think anyone is a professional here. I like this story because it's not X rated rubbish with no real plot. Thst's what I meant when it's better than what I usually read.

By the way, I did try to read your other story (Evolution) but for some reason I found chapter 1 quite boring so I stopped, or there's just something about it that made me not want to continue reading. I didn't want to ruin your integrity by giving a bad review you see.



Author's Response:

Thanks Stubborn!!!  I'm glad you're liking my story.  I don't think every story should be X rated and I don't really plan on making this one racey but I'm not totally against putting it in if it presents itself at the right time.  I don't like to put sex into a story unless there's a reason for it.  I know Evolution is a slow starting story but it has picked up.  I'll admit to being a skimmer when it comes to reading some stories and it is difficult to set up a story in the first chapter while trying to make it interesting, that's why I'll try to endure the first chapther because sometimes it does get more interesting as the story goes on.  That one has been a bit of a challenge anyway with the amount of characters I've put into it.  I myself do also go by the old adage, if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything.  If I don't like it, I simply don't read it and I appreciate honesty.  Thank you!!!

Reviewer: jkidd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

While I'm a fan of smut, this story is better clean. I'm all good for some fantasy, and this is a site about giants afterall; no one said it has to be erotica. And as for incest, I completely agree with you. I don't get it, it scares me, just no. But, each to his own.



Author's Response:

The world needs a little smut but you are right about this story although that is not saying that the opportunity may present itself down the road.  Our two protanginist were only kids afterall when they became lost, so there will always be an innocence about them.  I'm glad I'm not the only one who feels this way about incest and your right, whatever flicks their bics.  I've have found a few clean stories on this site though.  I do find those stories to be some of the most well written and interesting.  Thank you for your kind words! 

Reviewer: jkidd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story. It's not the least bit smutty, which is refreshing, but an odd find on this site. I've never been one for giants though, so I'm perfectly content with the...'cleansliness' of this particular story. The plot's great, you've got a good style (not to mention a great chronistic voice), and overall, it carries along quite well. Glad I stumbled upon it:) I hope you continue.



Author's Response:

Thank so much!!!  I don't intend this story to be smutty but just pure fantasy.  I like my stories a little on the clean side so to speak.  I'm not into the incest thing either, I find that to be downright disgusting.  This is just a little hobby I enjoy.  I hope I can keep your interest!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh I see. What I meant is I have never read Hansel and Gretel. I don't put my real name on here either but I happen to have an account on both ficitonpress nad fanfiction and they sohuld have my real name. I'm actually hoping to finally finish the first chapter of my own fan fiction (Yu-Gi-Oh!, which with have a little giantess in it, albeit a couple of chracters they use such monsters so if you into that [which I doubt you are but if you are I'd love for you to give me soem feedback]) but I've been busy with assingments from college but with a major workload off my mind I should be more active here.

Also, to help with the elimination of spelling/grammer mistakes I reccomend getting a program will Speakonia. It's free and reads aloud what you copy into it. However, if you want I can point out any errors too.

If you a fanfiction account and of course, the time feel free to send me a message I'll give you the link. Anyway, I hope to see more of you the future. In the meanwhile, I'm going to stop bothering you so you can get to writing the next chapter!



Author's Response:

This is a great place to throw out some of my original stuff.  I write fanfic for Sookie Stackhouse under a different penname.  I like to write as a fun hobby, nothing serious.  I've met a lot of good people doing this.   I'm far from professional if you haven't figured that out but I have a crazy imagination that a lot of people envy.  I'll have to look you up over at fanfic.   I do know what you mean by the quality of some of the writing over here although the stories are interesting.  My stuff isn't the usual smut and dominatirx stuff I see throughout this site.  As you can tell I'm pretty equal opportunity when it come to the giant stuff.  There is not a lot out there where I can post original fantasy stuff.  I thought this would be an interesting place to start.  Thanks again for the suggestions.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

In the description of the story you spell his name as "Hansel", yet here it's spelt "Ansel". I just thought that a bit wierd. I have not the origianal myself but I'm pretty sure that's a mistake.

I'm wondering how they become giants. Did they touch something in the forest? I'm sure all will be exaplined soon enough. Do you know when you'll have the next chapter done? The story isn't too bad and I'll happily review it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Stubborn!  I know that is not your real name and you've guessed it, nancyarcher is not mine.  It's the name of the fifty foot woman in that old and ancient piece of sci-fi from the fifties.  Maybe I should change my description?  The story is inspired by Hansel and Gretle but I've changed the names to protect the innocent.  Ansel is the intended name for that character, it come from the famous photographer Ansel Adams.  Sorry about the confusion.  If you haven't figured it out yet, my characters don't run into the witch in the gingerbread house but something extraordinary did happen when they got lost.  Keep in mind they've been lost for ten years and so both the kids are now adults in a world that was once gigantic to them.  It'll be explained in due time.  I appreciate the reviews and I'm not sure when I'll have the next chappie ready but I'll have it up as soon as I can.  I do write fanfic for another site so I write these whenever I get time.  Again, thank you!!!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi (nancy? I know that probably isn't your name...)

This is a good effort and I like it. Some bits could be worded better so far it's pretty decent, better than what I'm used to read on here. I'm gonna take a look at the next chapter.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

A interesting story so far and it sounds like i will like this story as well. Good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks again as always Angel!  This is just a little piece of fairytale fantasy that I cooked up.  I thought I would post a little taste of it.

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