Reviews For Coming Clean
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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

spectacular chapters. love this story even more. well done.

cant wait to see where you take this

aaron
ps loved the foot/toe scenes

Author's Response: I'll be putting more effort into planned foot/toe scenes in the future. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ah! Such bosom buddies.*

*Sorry; couldn't resist!

:-D

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

This last chapter was the best thus far. She really got off on her "fetish". And she seemed to lose control of herself. Even though she promised not to, I'd like to see her continue to lose control and become harsher and harsher with little Jack.

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