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Reviewer: IBP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

I know it's been a..... while..... since this was posted but can't help myself. Fantastic stuff littlemac. Thoroughly enjoying going through all of your old tales.

Reviewer: Big_Bear Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

This, this was good. I liked it, a lot. Reminds me somewhat of A growing body of knowledge but edgier, with a better climax. 

Reviewer: dycemist Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. It's hard to think this story is a year old. It great to see how far you've come, and I can't wait to see what you bring this year. Even now, this story still stands as one of my favorites on the site.



Author's Response:

Gosh, thank you for the compliment. I'm glad my work has "replay" value, so to speak! As far as current project go, I'm working on a extensive full fledged story at the moment. All I can say is that it combines the GTS genre with an action/suspense thriller. Sort of a Giantess-meets-Jason Bourne type story haha. I'm shooting for really fleshed out characters and a well developed plot, so that stuff takes a while.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

lol. great ending.

do you have any other stories in the works?

aaron

Author's Response: I do. I am going to take a few days off however. I like to write from start to finish, and to get chapters out rather quickly.

Reviewer: minuss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good....nice work. It's refeshing to see a completed story posted. Great job!

Author's Response: Hey thank you very much!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

That was beautiful.

*Sniff-sniff!*

Sorry; must be sinusitis. ;-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

sweet... hope he still has the other pill in his pocket or ready to sling it into the giantess' mouth. cant wait for the next installment.

aaron
ps how is the dr hiding the other cases of this... 'condition'?

Author's Response:

I meant to mention that, they're being held at Valhalla in the other warehouses.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Whoa! Talk about working at cross-purposes. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter to see how (or even if!) Jack gets out of this.

Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Goodness, this story is shaping up into quite the epic tale. I can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great stuff!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing consistantly. I would like to improve as a writer, so if there is any insight you guys can offer it would be greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

*mills lane

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

lol he jump on the dr's back brandishing a knife like chucky.(an hes the perfect size)

(miles lane voice) "let's get-it-on!"

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

Jack's right. Even in these high-tech times, the military still seems to live by the old philosophy "shoot first/ask questions, afterward."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

I forgot that earlier incident, myself. So, Jack's amnesia can be forgiven.

Author's Response: I wrote it that way on purpose, because to the characters at the time it was a minor thing, easily forgotten.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

Next up: the inaugural bout of the Wrestling Titanesses Foundation (WTF)!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so consistently. It's nice to hear feedback on what people like to read, so I'm not just guessing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

More growing, huh? Maybe she should change her name to "Grow-zilla."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yep! I was right. Poor Jack!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

I knew Rocks-in-the-head-anne wasn't wound too tight to begin with. But, now that she has a height-and-mass advantage? Hoo-boy!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

im seeing a cat fight to gigantic proportions coming soon, or a one-sided massacre with evy standing over roxanne bloody corpse... i can dream right...

well anyways, the direction your going with this tale is masterful. keep it up

aaron

Author's Response: I'm glad that you and everyone else is enjoying this story. I'm already getting ideas for some other stories. I'll be sure to get another chapter up for this one tomorrow though, first.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

amazing story!!!!

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