Reviews For Earth's Cry
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 11:09 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
Date: April 01 2011 11:09 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
NOw, THAT is what I call an auspicious beginning! No way you'll ever succumb to George Lucas' Disease with this potential classic.
:-)
Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2010 2:21 PM Title: Prologue & Escape
Date: December 13 2010 2:21 PM Title: Prologue & Escape
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please ^^
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2010 7:00 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
Date: December 11 2010 7:00 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
wow great start. hope that you continue with this tale.
aaron
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2010 2:16 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
Author's Response:
Date: December 11 2010 2:16 AM Title: Prologue & Escape
"iron fist" How about "iron foot"? That's an expression I've used before in a story. Just thought it would be more fitting. ;)
Also, I think you mention Trey as being a "she" once.
When are you going to be writing more? This is one of the few good stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the head's-up. I caught the error and will correct it.
I will be adding to this story very soon, but I also have other stories that are in dire need of an update. But I'll try not to make the wait too long. Glad you enjoyed it, though. :)