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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 6:52 AM Title: Letting It All Out

Great story, I wonder if Nat is falling in love. I hope so. For the first time I am rooting for these two to become a couple.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2013 5:17 PM Title: Letting It All Out

"Geez...what I had gotten myself into?"

I thought he and Natalie had already established that. It's a drawer, you dummy!

Seriously, though; isn't it kind of a bad idea to put Bobby in there? Because, in most other stories, that's usually where the hyper-competitive female sibling first looks for whatever it is she initially wants to borrow behind her sister's back. Or, are you going to be even more innovative and not resort to that cliche' at all?

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