Date: February 22 2011 10:37 PM Title: Expiration Date
awesome story! great idea :)
[Report This]Date: December 23 2010 1:50 PM Title: Expiration Date
A zombie giantess is very creative. I’ve not seen it done before. I actually shed a tear when Chloe was being attacked (did I just say that?!) but then I was happy the evil man got he deserved. One minor this is that it would be better if you split the separate sections into chapters because it was a lot for me to take in and long chapters can be daunting for people and put them off. I was sad when the nuked her, even if she is a zombie. :/
I found the story to be very descriptive, it’s a shame Chloe’s parents couldn’t stop her though.
This was funny “You're acting like there's a giant zombie out there killing all our friends and trying to eat us right now!”
Other than that however, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I’m going to add you to my favourite authors. And I’ll have a look at some of your other stories tomorrow; there are lots so I don’t know where to start. If you return the favour that would be brilliant, but it's ok I don't mind too much.
Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to kinda take some normal cliche's and go against them, hence the parents showing up, begging, and then failing. One that I embraced though was campiness, especially with the guy just trying to get some from his girl.
Date: November 04 2010 4:27 PM Title: Expiration Date
I dont usually read giantess/growing stories (usually shrinking) but this was really good. i think the part i liked the most was the ending and for a halloween story it was perfect because hearing her say those final words would scare the crap out of anybody on the planet!