[Report This]Date: August 16 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome... your very good please keep up with the gentle giantess stories i love those so much, and i hope to see more of your work soon
tj
Author's Response:
Why thank you
[Report This]Date: December 01 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was really liking but all of a sudden Rachael and Becki overwhelm the pet which I was not expecting. I had not anticipaited them to be that hasty and didn't find it very believable. However, I like the concept you are trying to convey to the reader.
Author's Response: I guess it was a spur of the moment sort of thing, acted without thinking. Thanks for the comment
[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
thought that the idea was sound... although the character louise baffles me...
lucy's character was very dark but not very 'realistic' but then again this isnt taking place in 'our world'. but 'joey' is a mouse with human characteristics?(thats kinda cute, lol) only wish he could talk though.
loved how the relationship changed for racheal, becki, an 'joey' at the end.
an for being your first story, well done.
hope to read more from you in the future.
aaron
Author's Response: Louise is a nice and caring person who speaks her mind. She acts strong but underneath she's a bit shy. Lucy is nothing compared to some real people, and i didn't mention it but she did go to jail at the end. As for Joey, remember he is a mouse. The idea was that he couldn't talk or understand what they were doing to him (even if it does feel good). Hope that helped