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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

great to see this tale back. an it hasnt missed a beat. great job.

aaron

Author's Response:

Yep, it's rolling along...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm the first reviewer for this chapter? Yay me! :-)

Seriously, though; I loved how the dollhouse's destruction symbolically over-lapped with the real-world property damage. Nice touch, that!

Author's Response:

It's not too difficult to get firsties!  And yeah, the dollhouse was doomed from the start.

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