[Report This]Date: February 17 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I eagerly await the next one!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
love how nells character is unfolding. an you havent lost anything off the storyline. great job im still interested to see where this tale goes from here.
an linda... whata bitch. damn she needs to be taught a lesson.
aaron
ps glad youre back, an cant wait for more
Author's Response: Yeah, part of the reason for the delay was a bit of worry about whether I could maintain the characters and whatnot, even as the plot moved forward. I'm glad this is staying consistent, and that you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
A new chapter, complete with realistic depictions of quite-plausible reactions (and over-reactions).
Well done! :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured at least one person had to react negatively to Nell's growth, and Nell is quite sheltered. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad you've resumed this story, it's one of my favorite stories on here. The way you make the charcters believable and likeable is just amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks Malaka! I know there was a pretty big gap, I just kind of hit a roadblock. At this point, I have only the vaguest idea of what's coming next, but hopefully it will be interesting!