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Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love this tale so far! It takes its time in detailing the characters, and, judging by the length of your chapters, it looks as if there's lots more to come.

PS: Hope Nell doesn't turn all 'violent and cruel giantess' when she reaches mega size.



Author's Response: Yeah, there should definitely be more to come. Nell would probably need a pretty good reason to go violent, as it's not really in her nature.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

lol love the last paragraph.

love the length of your chapters. as well as the substance.
glad you added the part bout her toe-nail polish. that was intriguing.
an the 'slow growth' is different but surprisingly refreshing. love the pace of this tale too.

aaron

ps is mr. winthrop 6'4"?

Author's Response: Yeah, the growth is incredibly slow right now, but obviously to get to mega without taking forever and a day, it will speed up at some point soon. Bill is around 6'3" - 6'4", he's a big guy.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice bit of foreshadowing with the dollhouses.

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