[Report This]Date: November 01 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow yet another incredible chapter. Ending kinda reminded me of 'attack of the 50ft woman' growth scene. Its really interesting an believable, well done.
Also loved the part where Nell is daydreaming about being giant looking down at the tiny 'doll' sized mansion. But most of all I love Nell's attitude an the fact the she has a kind heart. But most importantly she's not the prototypical spoiled rich kid.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Aaron.
Ps is Winston the only 'butler' type person?
Author's Response: Thanks Aaron. Yeah, I'm trying to make Nell deviate from the norm - she's more sheltered than spoiled, and I think that should evolve in interesting ways as she grows.
Winston is, indeed, the house's only butler. He and Lenette have been Nell's primary caretakers for most of her life.
Finally, expect more with the dollhouse, I'm making that something of a running theme.