Reviews For Paragon
Reviewer: ChompChomp Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
Date: December 25 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
WHY HAVE YOU STOPPED?!!!
;( IM GOING TO CRY!!!!
Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
Date: November 11 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
Another good chapter. Amazing that Antara can already show such restraint in her new body. I love the lingo you've created for this story -- Urtykes, Gargants, Pantarchs, Eyeless, etc. Very creative.
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
Date: November 08 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 3: Perils and Pleasures
simply breathtaking. the sex scene was awesome. as welll as the first paragon sighting. love this unforgettable epic.
aaron
ps the vocab you use in this tale is refreshingly extensive. thank you very much for this.
Author's Response: Thank you also for taking the time to respond to each update. Its really refreshing on my end to hear somebody is genuinly enjoying my story.