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Date: October 25 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

What a great idea to work the Spider and Black Widow in together.
And there's got to be some vore potential in the dehydrated powder people idea, that you've so wisely brought in from the movie. Remember, every one of them has a MEMBER, to paraphrase Penguin.
I hope Catwoman's going to eat someone like that soon.
You're welcome to adapt the idea I just put in the last chapter of my newly posted "ALL NEW SUPERFRIENDS VORE" (all thought of and written before I read this chapter of yours, I assure you).
Still loving this story the mostest.

Author's Response: Thank you. In the immortal words of Mirror-Spock: "I shall consider it."

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Date: October 25 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Zounds!
What multiple plot twists abound!

Author's Response: Hey, folks! He's a poet! And I didn't even know it.

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Date: October 23 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is your best yarn yet.
Love the hilarious tumbling helplessly into the woman's bubblebath.

Author's Response: Thanks, again. Btw: I might be throwing in some vintage movie-serial references in later chapters. Just to enhance the camp. ;-)

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Date: October 23 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Was there a Sinbad movie where he was relatively tiny? What was it called.
Your yarn has a great mix of crossover and comedy by the way.

Author's Response: Well, THE 7TH VOYAGE OF SINBAD, starring Kerwin Matthews (and stop-motion animated by Ray Harryhausen), featured a shrunken woman. Perhaps, in a reverse-homage to that, the writers for THE ADVENTURES OF SINBAD* had Rumina the Sorceress shrink Sinbad, himself, in the ninth episode of the first season! * A Canadian/South African co-production (1993-95) that starred Zen Gesner in the title role.

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Date: October 23 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the opening gag on the way the show looped.
You also explained the radiation bath better than the show did.
Now I know what crossover your emails were talking about. This is fun. Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: Thank you. Although, you must have been blinded by your tears of laughter not to catch the "Jack and Rose" reference. ;-)

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