[Report This]Date: February 19 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
You really bring the narrator to life, and give her background and her character depth. I also loved the image of the fairy scrabbling up the side of the bathtub. Really good stuff
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, It's always nice to see my stories being appreciated! Glad you liked it!
Date: December 24 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
its a great story i realy like your writing style
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 28 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it. Gentle stuff can be a rarity around here but you do it well. Glad to see you try a girl/girl sw tale too, you do it well.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you love it. There's nothing like a gentle gts story, in my opinion :)
[Report This]Date: October 24 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love a story that takes it time, and I could easily see this story expanded even further, without loosing pace. Wish I had the patience you show when writing stories. I tend to get ahead of myself, so it's really nice to read something written by someone who has his/her head in the game...
Author's Response: It's always nice to hear from a new reviewer, thanks a lot! I also like stories that take time to unfold, because they help realize the characters more fully, and make them feel more like actual people you can care about.
Date: October 22 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
It seems things are heating up between our heroines. Lucy sure has come pretty far in a few days.
Re: Trows -- Yes, they're small, hairy, troll-like creatures that live underground. They're from the folklore of the Orkney Islands (north of Scotland). Not Celtic exactly, more a mix of faerie/elf legends and Norse trolls.
Author's Response: I knew I was on the right track ;) Thanks for another awesome review!
Date: October 20 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ps sorry for yet another question but what is a trow? A small magic troll... That has been bothering me for quite some time, lol.
Aaron
Author's Response: It is very much like what you said, a small, troll-like creature. I think it's from Celtic mythology, but I'm not sure. It lives in the islands north of Scotland, I think.
Date: October 20 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Honestly because aunt Ruth reminds me of ofelia's mother's. Just wish that she would have shown more of her endearing qualities. At any rate, will this next chapter be the last?
Aaron
Ps is the trow gone for good?
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks for clearing that one up for me, lol. It's been bothering me for quite some time!
The next chapter won't be the last, but the story is definitely near its ending. And yes, the trow is dead. He wasn't much of a match for Lucy :)
Date: October 18 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. I too like the gradual development of Lucy and Livia's relationship. Given the time period, Lucy's reaction to the idea has been presented realistically. It's good that they didn't just hop into the sack together right away.
To Aaron -- Pan is the Greek god of the forest. He's half man, half goat. I assume the creature that visits the girl in Pan's Labyrinth is either Pan himself or a similar being (like a satyr or faun).
Author's Response: Thanks, though I must say, their relationship is developing faster than I can write about it! But I'm glad it didn't happen too fast, according to you.
Date: October 17 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love that movie as well. But why is it called Pan' labyrinth? I mean I get the labyrinth part, duh lol. But pan... Oh well guess its somebody's name. But yea the ending was sad but it was but she is now truly happy...
Author's Response: Lol, looks like Pixis answered your question before I could. Still, thanks for the review!
Date: October 16 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
RRRUUUUTTTTHHHHH!!!!!
lol. sorry had to get that outta my system.
Date: October 06 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
A trow, eh? I've heard of those. Nice choice of antagonist. I like the playful interaction of these characters and the gradual shift towards the romantic.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review! The trow will appear in chapter 3, hopefully not too different from the real thing, lol.
Date: September 23 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gotta love the Wee Folk. This should prove interesting, especially given that title. I look forward to the rest.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow it seem as though youve gone back to your bread n butter, lol.
but in all seriousness this story is incrediblly imaginative and the over all plot is spectacular.
the gentleness is a breath of fresh air, the fairy is a welcomed change to your style as well.
anyways, im greatly anticipating chapter 2.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron, I had a feeling you'd like it ;-) It won't be as eventful as my other stories, but I'm pretty fond of the story - it's the kind of thing I find appealing.
See you at chapter 2!