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Reviewer: Ripley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2010 12:37 AM Title: Pages (12-25) / 403

The original Realm of Melanie was the 1st GTS story I ever read, so I have pretty fond memories of that.

Are you going to make Melanie less violent here? I remember you claiming the original story became darker than you had intended.



Author's Response: I'm glad to have had an impact, thank you for your comment! I never really knew if anyone read my 'nonstory' words, xD
Well, I really wish I could, and I really do want to, and I have it planned out in the future. However in this version I just revised it completely, so I dunno if she'll be as violent as in the original draft, but it'll be better at least. Her character did become darker than originally intended, but I guess that's just how she developed. When I rewrite the entire story, it'll be even better. :)
But let me know what you think about this new rewrite as I post new updates. It is quite different than the original one I posted on the site all those years ago. xD
--TFK

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