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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Not sure how Carinne can be six inches tall when Erryl feel almost forty feet when she dropped him...

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter... cant help but think that this was just too easy though. something will happen...
aaron

Author's Response: I'd tell you what happens next, but that would be spoiling the ending.

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