Date: December 11 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
One thing I would say is you mention the name "Gailina" before she introduces herself. It's wierd how the smaller giants hate humans whereas the larger ones are more friendly. That's not important, onto the next chapter.
Date: August 23 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whoa, an even bigger giantess! Was not expecting that. I like that the Sky-Giants (or at least Gailina) are not overly antagonistic to humans but still consider themselves above them. Makes sense. Erryl will certainly have his work cut out for him getting her to help though.
Author's Response:
Unless he just hapened to have found the one Sky-Giant who actually wants to learn more about humans. Convenient? Maybe a little...
Its always nice to see reviews from you, thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow great description on the 'sky-giants'. and the mega aspect is not my cup of tea but it fits this story perfectly. and gailina's demeanor and overall attitude was remarkable...
cant help but wonder how erryl will ever convince gailina his plight is i guess 'worthy' enough for her to accept.
also wondering whats become of the lone thief that was following him?(guess hes just filler. lol)
and would carinne be approximately 2 inches compared to gailina?
anyways yet another magnificent chapter
aaron
Author's Response:
Hmm, quite a lot of questions, I see.
1) The thief is still around, remember, it was several hours after Erryl went in that he went into the cave.
2) Carinne would be about 6 inches compared to Gailina.
As for convincing Gailina to help, I don't think that'll be too difficult. She has become rather bored lately. Thanks for the insightful review!