Date: August 02 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's a shame you're not keen on this work. It's probably, no. It is the best, cleanest, softest vore story I've seen by all of the female writers on this forum.
It has all the great mouth play and I love the new angle on throwing the shoe (unique escape attempt plot device in itself, and even more original the way it backfires).
I'd be happy to email, but am guessing you're not really into discussing this type of story much.
Terrific writing. The only difference I'd have done was make Joseph a bit more of an innocent victim. The female characterization is spot on, and couldn't be improved. I'd love to see another chapter with a new assistant (ideally somewhat younger than Alexis) being chased around the lab first and then caught and eaten. But what you've done is great.
Author's Response: Well it's one of those things that I didn't feel all that into during the actual writing, but the people I showed it too had reactions similar to yours so I guess it's probably just me who doesn't like it for what it is. Thank you very much for your kind words though.